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    Hi all.
    Next week, I will give my teacher the assigment ( so important). I do it about "My opinion about Tom Hanks (In film "The Terminal")". I divided into 3 paragraphs.
    This is my first paragraph. Thanks for reading, please help me all friends.

    I like studying English, because it is a nice language in the world. English helps me much more than I have thought. Therefore, I can understand interesting English stories or helpful information about studying English or know the most English news in the world. Now, I know some good methods studying English well. Fortunately, one week ago, I watched a funny movie film “The Terminal”. I studied a creative way studying English by Mr. Viktor Navorski who is the main character in the film “The Terminal”. He comes from Krakozhia where do not speak English as the main language. He goes to New York to complete the promised by his father.

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    anthu I think you mean "former (ex) teachers "when you say "old teachers",don´t you?

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    HI Janaina. What do you mean? Your opinion is that I wrong when used old teacher (maybe). please, give me the clearly question. thanks.

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    well,old teachers is bad becuse it´s a bit offensive to call a person "old"
    then I think you either mean previous/ex - teachers or as michelle suggested retired ( no longer working)...

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    Quote Originally Posted by anhtu
    Hi all.
    Next week, I will give my teacher the (this )assigment ( (It´s very important)so important). (What I have to do is give my opinion..)I do it about "My opinion about Tom Hanks in the film "The Terminal")". I divided (it) into 3 paragraphs.
    This is my first paragraph. Thanks for reading, please help me all friends.
    I like studying English because it is a nice language in the world. English (has helped me...)helps me much more than I have thought. (Nowadays I can..)Therefore, I can understand interesting English stories or helpful information about studying English or ( learn/read about English..)know the most English news in the world. Now, I know some good methods (for )studying English well. Fortunately, one week ago, I watched a funny movie (called) “The Terminal”. (I thought it was a creative way of studying English..)I studied a creative way studying English ( through watching )by Mr. Viktor Navorski ,who is the main character in the film . He comes from Krakozhia ,where ( English is not spoken as..) do not speak English as the main language. He goes to New York to ( fulfill a promise he had made to his father) complete the promised by his father.
    It´s indeed a very funny movie,anhtu.

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    Quote Originally Posted by anhtu
    HOLIDAYS in VIETNAM
    In Vietnam, there are many holidays in the year and the traditional holidays are the most important.....
    I want to know if one can write this way:

    In Vietnam, there are many holidays in a year and the traditional holidays are the most important ones.

    What is actually the difference between the sentence I wrote and the sentence anhtu wrote?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Janaina Volker
    It´s indeed a very funny movie,anhtu.
    Thanks for your help, film is also totally funny and I like this film.

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    dear Fazzu.
    I think your sentence is Ok

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    Thanks Anhtu.I hope to get others suggetions as well.

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    Hay Anh Tu!
    Yes! I hope you give us many your problem to correct, I will try to do you in my view!

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