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TOPIC: STORY ABOUT BILL GATES
I will tell you an interesting story that is Bill Gates story, Yes! He is a rich and smart man that I know. He was born in the nice day October 28, 1955. Be a child of nice man, Bill Gates is also handsome as his father, I guess. As I told you Bill Gates is a intelligent people therefore he had studied really good at his childhood; in addition he also liked and got totally interested in radio, electronic, light, pan I guess. I have been heart a lot of stories about Bill Gates who is one of the richest in the whole world and very generous. He has earned a lot of money of velunteer center; In addition he plans to give away 95% his earning when he old and gray. I really like him, in my heart, he is not only kind person but he is also very interlligent, competitive and belief. His belief in high intelligent and hard work has put him where he is today. Thank god gave Bill Gates for the earth. Supper man, Bill Gates who discovered Microsoft that is very necessary for our developing nowadays.
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