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    Would somebody please help me with my sentences?

    Quality of information in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journals has attracted considerable research attention across a wide range of countries, across time, in different type and number of journals and advertisements. For example, in 1990, Chirac et al. evaluated 141 advertisements in paramedical and medical journals in French-speaking African countries in order to determine the content and compliance with the French regulation . More than a decade after that, in Finland, Lankinen et al. assessed 245 advertisements in Finnish medical journals to evaluate the quality of evidence for claims. Only a few researchers retrieved the and assessed whether the references supported the claims.

    Although researchers use different methods, focussed on different issues and do not measure all possible outcomes measure, all studies have shown similar results: low quality of information in pharmaceutical advertisements in medical journals. However, to date no systematic review available to summarize the current body of evidence on the quality of advertising in medical journal such as how accurate is the supporting evidence and how mislead is the advertisements given different types of pharmaceutical promotion control in every country.

    I need to include a statement about pharmaceutical control in the last sentence in order to link with the next paragraph which is about pharmaceutical control. Does the sentence look good?

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    Dean

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    However, to date no systematic review is available summarizing the current body of evidence on the quality of advertising in medical journals, such as how accurate the supporting evidence is and how misleading the advertisements are because there are different types of pharmaceutical promotion control in every country.

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    Thanks Tdol.

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