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    #1

    promotional info sheet

    A friend asked me to write an info sheet for them, it's attached. Would be nice if you make some corrections if needed.
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    Re: promotional info sheet

    trip-pop- trip hop
    melodic voice,- melodic voice;
    in any way- some?
    fusion out of- fusion of
    not only a computer make- not only does a computer make
    their still- but they're still
    The projects self-titled- The project's self-titled
    contain- contains

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    #3

    Re: promotional info sheet

    trip-pop is their "own" style ..

    "in any way", do you mean "in some way" ?

    Thank you very much for corrections.

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    #4

    Re: promotional info sheet

    ....with this combination the project HAS the ambition...

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    #5

    Re: promotional info sheet

    Quote Originally Posted by Janaina Volker
    ....with this combination the project HAS the ambition...
    Which word make you decide to use HAS? "project" or "combination"? I know that usually the "s"-extension come along with the words it/he/she but a female friend told me that some words could be "it", but is there "a kind of" recipe how to find such words?

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