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    Sentences

    Would somebody please help me with my sentences?


    1) Every prescription drug available on the market has its own approved product information. Each product information is expected to contain objective, adequate and concise information on properties common to the active component and specific to the drug product. The information provided is intended to guide doctors for safe and effective use of drugs. This is because together with the health benefits, the use of drugs is associated with risk and harm to many people even at therapeutic doses. In Australia, in 1995, more than 20% of hospital adverse events are drug related and 50% of drug related events were judged highly preventable.


    2) Information about drugs also reach physicians through pharmaceutical promotion.

    3) Therefore, high quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion needs to be accessible to doctors in helping them to determine the best prescription for every patient.



    Thanks and best regards,

    Dean
    Last edited by dean; 03-Aug-2006 at 09:32.

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    Re: Sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by dean
    1) Every prescription drug available on the market has its own approved product information. Each product information is expected to contain (an) objective, adequate and concise information on properties common to the active component and specific to the drug product. The information provided is intended to guide doctors for safe and effective use of drugs. This is because together with the health benefits, the use of drugs is associated with risk and harm to many people even at therapeutic doses. In Australia, in (a) 1995 (survey), more than 20% of hospital adverse events are drug related and 50% of drug related events were judged highly preventable.

    2) Information about drugs also reach physicians through pharmaceutical promotion.
    3) Therefore, high quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion needs to be accessible to doctors in helping them to determine the best prescription for every patient.
    i corrected some of your errors.. hope i was able to help you...

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