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    Would somebody please help me with my English?

    Studies have shown that doctors and patients are exposed to the negative impacts of pharmaceutical promotion. Therefore there is a need for effective control of pharmaceutical promotion in every country worldwide.

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    Dean

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Therefore, there
    in every country worldwide- this is repetitious to me- I'd delete 'worldwide'

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