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    esophea is offline Member
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    Unhappy Please edit my cover

    # 3EoE1, Street 281, Sangkat
    Boung kok I, Khan Toul kok,
    Phnom Penh, Cambodia
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    15-August-2006


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    Dear Sir or Madam:

    I would like to be considered for the Finance Assistant position which your company advertised in the August 10th on the world vision website www.worldvision.org.kh.

    I graduate from National University of Management (NUM) with a Bachelorís degree in Accounting. Also, I had graduated from Battambang Language Skill Center (COERR). I utterly believe that my knowledge in the areas of Business Administration, Principal Accounting, Intermediate Accounting, Financial Management, Financial Statement Analysis, Computers and other skill as detail in my curriculum vitae would be an asset to your organization. During my studying period, I worked in group, researched, wrote reports and performed in class about that reports. Therefore, I have a good interpersonal and communication skill.

    My background and career goal seem fit to your requirement well. I am confident that I can perform the work effectively and efficiently.

    At your convenience, I would appreciate your giving me the opportunity to discuss my qualifications in person, and I would be happy to come for an interview at your convenience. I can be reached at mobile phone: 012 365 454.


    I look forward to hearing from you soon.


    Yours Sincerely,



    E Sophea

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: Please edit my cover

    Look at the edits in the other post.

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