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    Cool Will you please help me correct this?

    In my country teenagers usually wear different sort of clothes according to their style. You can find youngsters wearing baggy jeans, caps, and sweatshirts. You can also find people wearing trousers, shirts, suits, dresses, etc.
    Girls usually wear tight jeans, T-shirts and boots. Some boys wear black clothes and long hair, others wear sport clothes of famous brand names such as Nike or Adidas. I prefer wearing jeans and shirts because I am in the middle-aged group.




    Thank you for your help
    Last edited by allp57; 24-Aug-2006 at 18:04.

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    Re: Will you please help me correct this?

    This is fine but I think you need to add a concluding sentence....

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    Smile Re: Will you please help me correct this?

    Thank you for your comments

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