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    Thumbs up Hello to the forum members.

    I am Zahra Naqvi. I did Masterís in Applied Psychology, BEd, Advanced Diploma in English Language and Literature and MA TEFL in progress. I also write poetry in English but only when feel to write something. I was searching material for my assignment when come across to this forum so I register myself here. I would like to have the favour of respectable teachers caz want to make my assignments best.

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    Re: Hello to the forum members.

    Hello Zahra

    Could you elaborate on what kind of advice you are looking for?

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    Re: Hello to the forum members.

    Welcome to UsingEnglish.com!

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    Zahra Naqvi is offline Newbie
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    Thumbs up I need your help for report writing....

    Hello, Can anybody help me to meet the demands of this question, I need an idea how to make it a colouring newspaper report. so I will wait for your respond.


    Here's the transcript of an interview. I have to write a colouring newspaper report on the basis of following information.

    Abrar-ul-Haq: Pakistan's Pop icon

    Q: What's your date of birth?
    A: 21st July

    Q: And your place of birth?
    A: Faisalabad

    Q: What's your zodiac sign?
    A: Leo

    Q: How did your career start?
    A: By chance I made a song "Billo Dey Ghar" and it started.

    Q: What about your Music Education?
    A: I didn't have any formal Music Education.

    Q: What comes deeper from your soul, Music or Lyrics?
    A: Lyrics, But sometimes Music inspires to write lyrics.

    Q: What did you expected from your album "Nachan Main Oday Naal"?
    A: An average album, although it went better then that.

    Q: Are you satisfied with the results of "Nachan Main Oday Naal"?
    A: Alhamdulillah Yes, But previous one was better.

    Q: How do you rate yourself as a musician?
    A: I am blessed with the prayers of my parents and Allah has given me all those tunes and those lyrics.

    Q: How long you have been involved in Media?
    A: Nine Years.

    Q: What about your project SAHARA for Life Trust?
    A: Alhamdulillah it is doing great and I want to take it to greater heights.

    Q: What kind of people you like?
    A: Hones, Intelligent and Hardworking.

    Q: What kind of people you dislike?
    A: Rude and proud.


    With BEst Wishes

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    Thumbs up PLz help me in Report Writing.....

    I placed a question there, but there is no answer to it... I will be happy to find answer from eloquent and ardent teachers and senior members..
    I m waiting for it... so if anyone can make that help I m requesting to him/her.

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    Zahra Naqvi is offline Newbie
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    Thumbs up Re: Hello to the forum members.

    Plz I m looking for answer so do help me if anyone available here.

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    Re: Hello to the forum members.

    Quote Originally Posted by Zahra Naqvi View Post
    Plz I m looking for answer so do help me if anyone available here.
    Hi Zahra,

    I think the problem here is that this falls into the realm of 'doing your homework for you', which is not the purpose of this forum.

    If you could make an attempt to write your own attempt at the question, people here will be able to make suggestions.

    By the way, I assume you mean a 'colourful' newspaper report, rather than a 'colouring' one?

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    Thumbs up Re: Hello to the forum members.

    Actually I dont mean to find a ready made solution I m looking for a way how to take a start, if only 2 lines are being written I can make rest of it. So I m looking for an inititial..... Hope to find soon
    Thanks for your reply.

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    Re: Hello to the forum members.

    Quote Originally Posted by Zahra Naqvi View Post
    Actually I dont mean to find a ready made solution I m looking for a way how to take a start, if only 2 lines are being written I can make rest of it. So I m looking for an inititial..... Hope to find soon
    Thanks for your reply.
    No, you are addressing this in the wrong way. What you are asking for is a stylistic start. You can do that yourself in your own language if need be. If you COULD write the whole thing after two lines of leading suggestion, then you don't need a language course - you need a creative writing course.

    I repeat, suggest an initial direction by posting your draft composition (however bad the English), and the members here will advise you how to improve the language. But do not expect to have your thinking done for you.

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    Thumbs up Re: Hello to the forum members.

    Music is not just the name of tunes emanating from the instruments. It is syncronization of the soul with the ultimate truth. And when the soul strives to align with the enlightenment, it gets to garner the universal acclaim for too little an effort. This is how we are made to believe that amateur hits his stride and the professionalism seeks survival. Ibrarul Haq comes from the former select. Since music helps words dress themselves in rythm, Ibrar could directly lay his hands on instruments without formal education to have both with one throw: lyrics sprouting from the strings themselves. He didn't know that his trailing to " bilow de ghar" would leave enough marks for the stars-chasing media to tinge their texts with a staggering success story. When asked about his recent album " Nachan Main Oday Naal", Ibrar termed it an average album, although it gainfully captured a considerable audience and a good market for him. Nine years in media with an unwavering zeal has been fully capitalized by Ibrar to buttress his project SAHARA for Life Trust which he wants to hitch to the stars. Born on July 21st in Faisalabad, Ibrar has caused the Leos to elate with joy for sharing a symbolic sign with a real life star. Honest, intelligent, and hardworking people has his vote, but rude and proud are repellent for him. May he be blessed with his cause flourishing ! (Amen)

    Can anyone tell me how is it ?

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