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    Small sentence correction!!

    Hi anyone, could you please check sentence below ? Thanks

    Dega.. yep! Whenever somebody says this word, I visualize the scenic beauty that nature has betward upon dega. So profound and so natural.
    When we were kids, we would go everyyear to visit dega, we used to hike around "kalapa", and "Belka Temple" or sit hours at "Japanese tample". We loved horse riding and sometimes go to visit Jeemala Tea Gardens which are marvelous.
    But now if I look at Dega,.. it's no more dega that it used to be!!
    Some Tea Gardans are still intact, I love visiting Blojar, Tea Gardens etc. but the main town really disgust me.
    I visited Dega this year.. I find really hard to believe, how crowded it has become.May be I'm wrong, but I no more find any sence of being in dega town, I rather stay away in some small villages there!

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    Re: Small sentence correction!!

    Anyone? am i comming to wrong forum?

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    Re: Small sentence correction!!

    Quote Originally Posted by englerner
    Dega.. yep(ignore this)! Whenever somebody says this word, I visualize the scenic beauty that nature has betward upon Dega. So profound and so natural.
    When we were kids, we would go everyyear(every year) to visit Dega, we used to hike around "Kalapa", and "Belka Temple" or sit for hours at "Japanese temple". We loved horse riding and sometimes we go to visit Jeemala Tea Gardens which are marvelous(BE speakers write 'marvellous').
    But now if I look at Dega,it's no more Dega that it used to be!!
    Some Tea Gardans are still intact. I love visiting Blojar, Tea Gardens etc. But the main town really disgust me.
    I have visited Dega this year. I find it really hard to believe, how crowded it has become.May be I'm wrong, but I no more find any sense of being in Dega town, I would rather stay away(you may ignore this) in some small villages there!

    Hope I am right.

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    Re: Small sentence correction!!

    Thanks a lot!! may be my english is not that bad huh!!?

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    Re: Small sentence correction!!

    Yes.

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