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    Hi! I am writing an abstract for my University and before handing it in, i would appreciate it if you could please have a look at it!! just to be sure it is fine... My professor is a native English speaker and I wish my level of English was fine and easy to understand!!

    thanks a lot in advance!!
    yours,
    Giorgio
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    Hello, Giorgio. I just took a quick look at your paper. Here is some feedback:
    1. Socioeconomic and environmental conditions
    2. Use a period to end the first paragraph. of water abstraction strategies.
    3. I would say: Italian region of Sardinia.
    4. Add a colon. Data ... They include: and capitalized Slope

    I did not have time to read it all. Hope that helps.

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