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    Cool Starting story, need advice

    I'm starting a story,one about Love, trust& betrail+ tragic , anyone want to tip in anything they'd want me to add, e.g Setting of the story, time, phrases, or anything that pop into their head.
    Remember it's a Love,trust& betrail + tragic storyso make ur ideas suitable.
    Note: I'm not asking you to do the work i'm rainstorming atm and i'd be happy if ya give me a few ideas, ty =

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    Default Re: Starting story, need advice

    The words you are looking for are bertrayal and tragedy.

    Perhaps the woman of the story has two suitors and she cannot decide between them.


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    Bertrayal, tragedy huh? Hehe, Thanks.
    hm.. dunno why my teachers never corrected me about that -.-".

    any other ideas?

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    Default Re: Starting story, need advice

    Betrayal, not bertrayal. RonBee made a small typo.

    As far as your story goes....in a typical love, trust and betrayal story, your heroine is beautiful (slender, porcelain complexion, dancing green eyes, and gleaming mahogany hair) and has an impeccable background. Her love interest is handsome, gallant, physically fit and holds an impressive job. They meet, they fall in love, but something happens to shatter her trust. Perhaps just before they get married, the heroine's father confesses to her that he's not her true father, or something like that.

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    BTW, the word is brainstorming. (Thanks, Ouisch, for the correction.)

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