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    Please help me correct this sentence and then tell me whether there any mistake of vocabulary and grammar in it: "China's rapid economic growth in recent years has to a large extent been fuelled by business investment in new factories and other commercial premises, many of them producing low-cost manufactured goods".

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    Quote Originally Posted by lawyerquang View Post
    Please help me correct this sentence and then tell me whether there any mistake of vocabulary and grammar in it: "China's rapid economic growth in recent years has to a large extent been fuelled by business investment in new factories and other commercial premises, many of them producing low-cost manufactured goods".
    Say ventures instead of premises.

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