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    Is it grammatical correct?

    Global economy: Hope on the economic locomotive
    America suffers a setback

    Wrong world on international stage: instead of listening to the usual instructions to make a better economic policy in the industrial countries, the delegates of the third world gave the Finance Minister and the Manager of the Central Bank a telling-off. The economic prospects are in this bad position because the industrial countries have missed to pursue the monetary and financial economy and to reduce the restraint of increase, criticised the Syrian Mohammed Imady in the name of the developing countries. The delegates of the industrial countries had not much to oppose against the blame of the developing countries that were frightened to loose their fruits of the new economic policy.


    Thank you very much for your help in advance,
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    Re: Is it grammatical correct?

    third world- this temr is a bit out of fashion- try developing world
    had not much- did not have much

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    Re: Is it grammatical correct?

    Thank you sooooo much

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    Re: Is it grammatical correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Dany View Post
    Global economy: Hope on the economic locomotive
    America suffers a setback

    Wrong world on international stage: instead of listening to the usual instructions to make a better economic policy in the industrial countries, the delegates of the third world gave the Finance Minister and the Manager of the Central Bank a telling-off. The economic prospects are in this bad position because the industrial countries have missed to pursue the monetary and financial economy and to reduce the restraint of increase, criticised the Syrian Mohammed Imady in the name of the developing countries. The delegates of the industrial countries had not much to oppose against the blame of the developing countries that were frightened to loose their fruits of the new economic policy.
    Questions. How did America suffer a setback? What is meant by "Wrong world on international stage"? whose finance minister and which central bank are you referring to?

    Remember to capitalize only proper nouns.

    Say "lose their fruits of the new economic policy" (not loose).

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    Re: Is it grammatical correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by donato View Post
    Tell me how Padre Pio received the stigmata?
    Since that is not is not a question, it should not get a QM (question mark). Also, it would probably have been better to have started a new thread rather than post that on an existing one.

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    Please read some of the existing threads in this section before posting your own questions.
    ~R

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