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    An Eagle or A Chicken
    An hurter catched a little eagle on the top of a moutain, and brought it back and raised with chickens. Day after day, the eagle growed up and believed that he was a chicken deeply, he eated paddy and insects,played with the chickens just as a part of the chicken group.
    One day, the hurter wanted to educate him to be a bird hurnter, but he never dreamed that he could fly in the sky and be an accipiter. The hurter tried it in the diffirent ways but failed.
    At last, the hurted brought him back to the moutain and threw it down a cliff, the eagle droped down straight as a stone. he flustered to flicker, ultimately he stopped dropping and became a king of the sky.
    Translated from Chinese by Ian
    Last edited by wuwei; 20-Sep-2006 at 06:13.

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    a hurter catched- a hunter caught
    raised with- raised it with his chickens
    believed that he was a chicken deeply- truly believed that...
    eated paddy- ate (what's 'paddy'?)
    accipiter- ??
    diffirent - different

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    Default Re: A short stories

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    a hurter catched- a hunter caught
    raised with- raised it with his chickens
    believed that he was a chicken deeply- truly believed that...
    eated paddy- ate (what's 'paddy'?)
    accipiter- ??
    diffirent - different
    Thanks, Tdol,
    I am on my holiday now, so I can learn from you more these days.

    paddy-----something before rice processed-----here can I use it with rice
    accipiter------a ferocious bird

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