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    Could someone check and comment

    Priority: Find the most convenient rate

    -----------, sees each customer as an individual and makes every effort so that every company has an excellent security service, at a cost less than the market’s average.

    That is why our budgets will be subject to true necessities, without speculations that are applied to services of great magnitude, which your company might not require.

    Our budget will be guaranteed by a specific study carried out on your company, establishing priorities and presenting several economic options that will allow you to access and choose the best one that adapts to your budget.

    High-quality Human Resources and Professional Development

    Starting from a rigorous selection and background investigations on every applicant, up to detailed technical tests, converts ------------ in one of the most reserved companies in the incorporation of personnel.

    after the welcome of the new personnel, our Training Department will train the security professional.


    Thanks
    Daniel

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    Re: Could someone check and comment

    makes every effort so that every company- ensures that every company...
    will be subject to true necessities- Our estimates are based on genuine requirements, and will not contain items that are not usefvul (something like this- this sentence in the original reads badly to me- sounds like a translation)
    up to detailed- including detailed...
    in one of the most - into
    incorporation of personnel- recruitment...

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    Re: Could someone check and comment

    Tdol

    your the best, thanks

    Danie'

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