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    Exclamation URGENT - Please correct

    Is this letter grammatical correct?


    Dear Mr. Das,




    Haemaccel for veterinary use expansion beyond UK?
    Ref: SD/cjc


    In your letter dated 18 July 2006 you informed us that you have sent our enquiry to Intervet International in Boxmeer. As we still have no answer, we would be glad if you can give us the name as well as the telephone number of our contact person in Boxmeer together with the complete address.


    Yours sincerely,
    Dany

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    Default Re: URGENT - Please correct

    use expansion beyond UK- I'd say 'use outside the UK'
    would be glad if you can - would be grateful if you could

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    Thanks a lot, Tdol

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    Default Re: URGENT - Please correct

    you have sent our enquiry - you had sent our enquiry

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    i would write this way: changes in italic

    Haemaccel for veterinary use expansion Cross UK?
    Ref: SD/cjc

    With reference to your letter dated 18 July 2006. In which you described that you have sent our enquiry to Intervet International in Boxmeer.

    Realizing that we have not recieved the response from them. I will be very grateful if you share their contacts with us.Or ask them to response on our enquiry.



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