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    Cool follow up sales?

    Does the following sentences sound ok?
    My responsibilities include: Managing a team of six programmers ;designing software architectures; generating follow-up PLC sales.(is it ok?)

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    #2

    Re: follow up sales?

    The sentence is fine. Use commas instead of semi-colons to separate the items, and insert the word and before the word gererating.

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    #3

    Re: follow up sales?

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    Does the following sentences sound ok?
    My responsibilities include: Managing a team of six programmers ;designing software architectures; generating follow-up PLC sales.(is it ok?)
    I would use "architecture" in the singular.

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