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    Could you please check the text.

    Could you please check the text placed below.

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    Katya Pushkariova works in ZIMALETTO fashion clothes company as a secretary. Although, she has a sharp mind, sweet temper and clean soul by nature alas, no one man slowed down his sight on here. However, unremarkable appearance does not prevent Katya from dreaming of love and happiness.

    Katya tries to live relying on her soul's qualities and highest qualification but the cruel world which has get used to assess a person by first impression is unjust to her. Day by day, she has to listen to cheeky mockeries, to be a victim of mean practical jokes and at last, to get used to idea that she will stay an old maid and personal happiness is not for her. She aims all here professional and emotional energy at work.

    Katya submits herself to colleagues' unfriendliness but she doesn't guess that the reason of it is that her appearance interferes with treacherous plans of ambitious Andrey's fiancée Kira. Andrey's partner and Kira's brother either plays his game. His aim is become the head of the company. Katy's competence and her skillful actions brakes up plans of hidden enemies and Katya's state in the company is becoming more stable in spite of their intrigues.

    Katya is been steadily promoted. Successful business relations of Katya and Andrey turn into a big feeling, more that just a friendship. Katya understands that she loves her boss. But, Andrey falls for other person and that person is a dazzling beauty.

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    Re: Could you please check the text.

    How does this look?



    Katya Pushkariova works [FONT=verdana,geneva,lucida,'lucida grande',arial,helvetica,sans-serif]for the[/FONT] ZIMALETTO fashion clothes company as a secretary. Although she has a sharp mind and sweet temper, no man has so far noticed her. However, an unremarkable appearance does not prevent Katya from dreaming of love and happiness.

    In the office day by dayshe has to listen to mocking comments and is the victim of mean practical jokes. She has become resigned to the idea that she will stay unmarried and that personal happiness is not for her, so concentrates all her energy on her work.

    Katya suffers her colleagues' unfriendliness but she doesn't guess that the reason for it is that her presence interferes with the plans of ambitious Andrey's fiancée Kira and her brother, Andrey's partner. Through Katya's competence, their treacherous plans for the company are thwarted, and her position is made stronger.

    Katya is steadily promoted, and the feelings between her and Andrey become more than just friendship. Katya realizes that she loves her boss. But Andrey has fallen for someone else, and that person is a dazzling beauty.

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    Re: Could you please check the text.

    Anglika, thank you very much.

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