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    #1

    Please edit my letter.

    Dear Teacher,

    The following letter is for our Accounts department to issue a cheque. Please correct it.

    Dear Sir,

    This is to request you to pay $ 5,000/- to M/s Grand Transport Co. which is due for over 90 days. The accounts people are calling regularly/daily for the payment.

    Please arrange to issue a cheque in the name of M/s Grand Transport Co. urgently/at the earliest/as soon as possible.

    Regards,

    Margaret
    Clerk

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    #2

    Re: Please edit my letter.

    which is due for over 90 days- ,which has been due...
    I'd use 'urgently'


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    #3

    Re: Please edit my letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    which is due for over 90 days- ,which has been due...
    I'd use 'urgently'
    Thanks a lot for your help.

    Sweetie

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    #4

    Re: Please edit my letter.

    You're welcome, Sweetie.

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