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    Smile Cover and resume help me please....

    I need a little help with my cover letter and resume. I made the cover letter with a work experience and formation resume inside, is it correct? Is it the best way to send the letter cover, and the extended Curriculum in attached file at the mail?
    Please give me a hand reading the cover and suggesting modifications and corrections

    November 1, 2006
    Mrs. XXXX
    Im writing this letter in order to give You some information about my working skills.
    I spoke with Mr XXX, and he talk me about a possibility to send You my resume showing my education, experience, and background to take a chance to work at XXXXXX.
    I have over 16 years experience at the technical and help desk departments.
    May I arrange an interview to further discuss my qualifications? I am available for an interview at a mutually convenient time.
    Thank you for your time and consideration.

    Alexander XXX
    XXXXXX Rome - Italy
    +39-XXXXXX/ +39-XXXXXXXX
    EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

    Objective
    Seeking full time position at the Help Desk area.

    Skills
    3rd , 2nd , and 1st Help desk Level assistance.
    Microsoft systems administrator.
    Network Administrator.
    Visual Basic 6 Programmer.
    Microsoft OS Help Desk.
    Microsoft Office Help Desk.
    3rd part Help Desk assistance.

    Experience

    XXXXXX www.XXXXXXX.it
    Help Desk Manager, VB6 programmer, Web Designer,
    Network Administrator March 2005 - today
    IT responsible
    All levels Help Desk position
    VB6 Programmer
    Web designer using Macromedia tools
    Network Administrator

    XXXXXXXsrl www.XXXXXXXX.com
    Help Desk technician, Network Administrator, November 2004 - today
    IT responsible
    All levels Help Desk position
    Network Administrator

    XXXXXXX S.r.l. www.XXXXXXX.it
    Network Administrator, Help Desk, hardware technical support February 1990 - July 2004
    Responsible of the computers maintenance and configuration.
    Network manager.
    E-mail Service manager.
    Technical support on: Security policies, Firewall configuration, Backup & Recovery procedures, Responsible of the Hardware and Software platform, and technical support to the Formation Classrooms

    Education

    XXXXXX University www.XXXX.edu.es
    XXXXXXXX Degree date: 1985
    Certificates:
    XXXXXXX
    XXXXXXX
    XXXXXXX
    Courses:
    XXXXXXX
    XXXXXXX
    XXXXXXX
    Seminaries:
    XXXXXXX
    XXXXXXX
    XXXXXXX

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    Default Re: Cover and resume help me please....

    Don't use contractions.
    Don't capitalise 'you'.
    I wouldn't use a direct question.
    I'd suggest that the interview should be at their convenience to be polite, then negotiate.

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