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    hemmin is offline Junior Member
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    Default is there a better construction

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    After the patch is loaded into the system, the patch is in the deactivated state. The patch code cannot be executed. To execute the patch code, you need to activate it by using the command patch activate, that is to enable the patch to work in the active state.

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    JCrawf is offline Junior Member
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    Default Re: is there a better construction

    [quote=hemmin;125956] originalSuggested:
    After the patch is loaded into the system, the patch is in the deactivated state. The patch code cannot be executed in the deactivated state. To execute the patch code, you need to activate it by using the command patch activate.

    Hello, Hemmin,
    To me, it seems clearer with the above change.
    Regards



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