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    Lighting system

    I would be grateful if someone can help me to correct my letter.


    Dear Developer

    Further to our previous discussion with you regarding no timer control for lighting system of club house, timer/ schedule control shall be provided to lighting system of club house. We would like to seek your assistance in enhancing the existing lighting system so as to save energy consumption and manpower.

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    Re: Lighting system

    Quote Originally Posted by ben9108 View Post
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    Dear Use: Sir, Ma'am, Mr. ..., Mrs. ...
    Further to our previous discussion with you regarding the absence of timer control for the lighting system of ourclub house: a timer/schedule control system shall be provided by us to the lighting system of the club house. We would like to seek your assistance in enhancing the existing lighting system so as to save energy consumption and manpower.
    ... or do you mean:
    : a timer/schedule control system needs to be provided for the lighting system in the club house.
    I am unsure whether you are asking the contractor for a timer/schedule device, or giving him one and telling him to install it. Hope this helps.

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