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    Photograph Shop

    Dear Teachers,

    - Go straight ahead, go past the pawnshop. Youíll see a roundabout. Just turn around the roundabout into Lotus street. Go straight this street, youíll see a T-juntion / a T. Turn right at the lotus hotel onto Charles street. Go past the laundry about 20 meters, the photograph store will be on your right next to the music store. You canít miss it.

    - Is this ok and grammatical?

    Thanks a million

    Namsteven


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    Quote Originally Posted by namsteven View Post
    Dear Teachers,
    - Go straight ahead, go past the pawnshop. Youíll see a roundabout. Just turn around the roundabout into Lotus street. Go straight this street, youíll see a T-juntion / a T. Turn right at the lotus hotel onto Charles street. Go past the laundry about 20 meters, the photograph store will be on your right next to the music store. You canít miss it.
    - Is this ok and grammatical?
    Thanks a million
    Namsteven
    This is nearly perfect according to the rules. Some things you could have said more concisely or clearly. Heres an edit:
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    - Go straight ahead, go past the pawnshop, and youíll see a roundabout. Just take the roundabout onto Lotus Street and go straight this street. Youíll see a T-junction / a T. Turn right at the Lotus Hotel onto Charles Street. Go past the laundry about 20 meters, and the photograph store will be on your right, next to the music store. You canít miss it.
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    Anyway, it's all very understandable the way you posted it. Very good work!
    -Jesse
    Last edited by JSmiley; 08-Nov-2006 at 05:48.

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