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Graffiti: Is it art or a crime?
There are a lot of various styles in art and some of them are uncommon. Young people are not as conservative as adults. They attempt to vary their life creating new styles and directions in art and graffiti is one of them. However the majority of adults do not concur with youth opinion and consider that graffiti is a crime. In this composition I will discuss both points of views and express my opinion on the matter.
To begin with, it is often said that nothing can vary our life as new and modern ideas. So, graffiti is one of these modern ideas. Firstly, this style of art can improve the view of dark districts of the town. For example, a bright and colourful graffiti painted on the grey wall relieve a sombre town. Secondly, graffiti artists are enjoyed wide popularity in the modern firms and clubs. They design a series of government posters, and decorate nightclubs.
On the other hand, graffiti artists are usually aged under 20, so the majority of them are extremals. They break the law and illegally paint public buildings and transport. Thus, a lot of people regard graffiti as a form of a crime and vandalism. What is more, some graffiti artists paint dreadful things, such as death or blood. Consequently, these graffiti pictures have a negative effect on people.
In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The graffiti should be developed as a style of art, not as a crime. To my mind, government has to give a chance to young people to express themselves in that direction.