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    Default Re: Can you correct my composition, please?(:

    Quote Originally Posted by curmudgeon View Post
    Yes you are right your teacher would be a little suspicious, I think.
    Even only a little suspicious but nothing more(: In comparison with my classmates I know English quite well(: So I think there are wouldn't be any problems.

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    Default Re: Can you correct my composition, please?(:

    Quote Originally Posted by Katik View Post
    Maybe a little suspicious but nothing more (in comparison with my classmates I know English quite well.) So I don't think there will be any problem.
    Well, don't blame me if your teacher finds out. You might get marks for initiative

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    Quote Originally Posted by curmudgeon View Post
    Well, don't blame me if your teacher finds out. You might get marks for initiative
    Don't you think that I'm self-confident? Maybe. But don't blame me for that. I know that I make lots of mistakes, but I'm trying to cope with this problem. I do my best.

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    Default Re: Can you correct my composition, please?(:

    I'm sure your very self-confident, just don't be over-confident

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    Quote Originally Posted by curmudgeon View Post
    I'm sure your very self-confident, just don't be over-confident
    I think you are not right. How you can judge me if you don't know me? Only according to messages you can't know me(: And if I say that I'm totally diffident person, you will believe me or no?

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    Default Re: Can you correct my composition, please?(:

    One thing I know. You don't seem to be able to take advice very well. I don't need to know you to know that. You need to learn to accept constructive criticism (not that I have actually given you any) So don't get on your high horse with me.

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    Say:
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    Also, we make mistakes. We don't do them.

    (Actually, graffiti has been around for quite a while.)

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    (Actually, graffiti has been around for quite a while.)

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    Yes, I know that graffiti isn't a modern direction. But I didn't write a dissertation I only try to write something and express my opinion, by the way, I read this information in my course book, which was issued not long ago (:

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    The writings on the wall

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    Default Re: Can you correct my composition, please?(:

    This composition is about a friend email reply, she wants information about my friend

    Hi Claire,
    Thanks for your email. Of course, Iīm going to describe my friend Sarah.
    She is my best friend, she is 33 years old, she studied law with me. She is married and she has a daughter, the same year that mine. They are friends at school.
    She is charming person and hard-working. She works in an office as a Secretary. She likes cooking and she is very organized. She hasnīt a lot of free time but if she had free time sheīd play tennis. Itīs her favourite hobby.
    The another day, she told me that they want to travel, and I recommended tour town. Also, I told her that I have a friend with a farm house, and I gave her your email.
    For me, the only bad thing, is that she is smoker, she smokes very much, in my opinion, too much.
    I thind, that you will be well with her, during her stay in your house,

    best regards,

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