I will do a little now and then come back later. (Other questions await my attention.)
Say "We should give credit" (not "credits"). Also, I don't think I would use past inventors. How might you improve that sentence?Originally Posted by dean
In the second sentence, "their inventions have helped us a lot" is, I think, rather weak. (Say: "our daily lives") How might you improve that sentence?
Capitalize AIDS. (It is an acronym for autoimmune deficiency syndrome.) Say: "Many people have died from AIDS. Say: "I would help...." What might you replace "patients" with?Originally Posted by dean