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    Question Correction of "terms and conditions" - please

    Hello all!
    I have created "privacy policy & disclaimer" page which needs to be incorporated into my website. Could someone please have a look and correct it? thanks a lot!

    Sebastian



    General

    <mywebsite> is committed to protecting your privacy online. Our policy explains how we will do this.

    We have developed this policy because we want you to feel confident about the privacy and security of your personal information.



    What does this privacy policy cover?

    This privacy policy only applies to how <mywebsite> deals with your personal information. We have partnerships we number of other sites but this policy does not apply to any other company or to any other company´s websites even if you access them through our site. If you disclose your personal information to other companies your information will be dealt with according to their privacy practices.



    What information do we collect?

    From time to time, you will be asked to submit personal information about yourself in order to receive or use services on our website. Such services include newsletters, message boards and <mywebsite> membership. By entering your details in the fields requested, you enable us and our service providers to provide you with the services you select.

    We may ask you to provide the following information:
    - Your email addresses.
    - Registration: when we ask you to register, we ask for your name, email address and other personal information.
    - We may also use cookies. For an explanation, see the section on cookies below.



    Use of Cookies

    Cookies are very short text files which many web sites transfer to your hard disk. We may use cookies to track information and website usage. Information supplied by cookies can help us to provide you with a better online user experience. On our clients sites we may use cookies for the purpose of tracking visitor numbers, advertising or sale information.

    We use cookies, but most parts of our site can be accessed even if your cookies are turned off. But you may find there are parts of the site which you cannot access if your cookies are turned off.

    Please be aware that this activity does not collect any personal information that can be used to identify you in any way.

    If you want to know more about cookies please go to <address> which explains how cookies work and how you can manage their use.



    How do we use your information?

    We use the information to help us understand more about how our web site is used, to improve our site, and to send you information about us and our products which we think may be of interest to you, both electronically or otherwise.

    Unless you have informed us that you do not wish to receive further information about our products and those of our affiliates and partners, we and they may send you direct mail.



    When do we share information?

    We do not sell your personal information to others.

    We operate in correlation with third party sites. We may at times share your information with these third parties and our associated companies.

    If you sign up for services that are managed or offered by other organizations, they will obtain your information.

    A number of other people's web sites have links on our site. If you link to their sites, they may collect information. Such sites are not within our control and are not covered by this privacy statement.



    Disclaimer

    This website operates independently and provides details on every product from all of the major breakdown recovery service providers in the market. All information found on this website should be treated as an introduction to authorised breakdown recovery service providers where breakdown cover can be purchased either on their website or over the phone. The website does not provide any form of advice or recommendation of one service over any other. Although all of the information on this website is kept up to date, it is provided "as is" and with specific disclaimer of any warranties of merchantability. The information provided should always be confirmed on the advertiser's website directly.



    Links

    Links to other web sites are provided by <mywebsite> in good faith and for information only. We disclaim any responsibility for the materials contained in any web site linked to this site.

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    Re: Correction of "terms and conditions" - please

    Quote Originally Posted by KingOfDawn View Post
    Hello all!
    I have created "privacy policy & disclaimer" page which needs to be incorporated into my website. Could someone please have a look and correct it? thanks a lot!

    Sebastian



    General

    <mywebsite> is committed to protecting your privacy online. Our policy explains how we will do this.

    We have developed this policy because we want you to feel confident about the privacy and security of your personal information.



    What does this privacy policy cover?

    This privacy policy only applies to how <mywebsite> deals with your personal information. We have partnerships with a number of other sites but this policy does not apply to any other company or to any other company´s websites even if you access them through our site. If you disclose your personal information to other companies your information will be dealt with according to their privacy practices.



    What information do we collect?

    From time to time, you will be asked to submit personal information about yourself in order to receive or use services on our website. Such services include newsletters, message boards and <mywebsite> membership. By entering your details in the fields requested, you enable us and our service providers to provide you with the services you select.

    We may ask you to provide the following information:
    - Your email addresses.
    - Registration: when we ask you to register, we ask for your name, email address and other personal information.
    - We may also use cookies. For an explanation, see the section on cookies below.



    Use of Cookies

    Cookies are very short text files which many web sites transfer to your hard disk. We may use cookies to track information and website usage. Information supplied by cookies can help us to provide you with a better online user experience. On our clients' sites we may use cookies for the purpose of tracking visitor numbers, advertising or sale information.

    We use cookies, but most parts of our site can be accessed even if your cookies are turned off. You may find there are parts of the site which you cannot access if your cookies are turned off.

    Please be aware that this activity does not collect any personal information that can be used to identify you in any way.

    If you want to know more about cookies please go to <address> which explains how cookies work and how you can manage their use.



    How do we use your information?

    We use the information to help us understand more about how our web site is used, to improve our site, and to send you information about us and our products which we think may be of interest to you, both electronically or otherwise.

    Unless you have informed us that you do not wish to receive further information about our products and those of our affiliates and partners, we and they may send you direct mail.



    When do we share information?

    We do not sell your personal information to others.

    We operate in correlation with third party sites. We may at times share your information with these third parties and our associated companies.

    If you sign up for services that are managed or offered by other organizations, they will obtain your information.

    A number of other people's web sites have links on our site. If you link to their sites, they may collect information. Such sites are not within our control and are not covered by this privacy statement.



    Disclaimer

    This website operates independently and provides details on every product from all of the major breakdown recovery service providers in the market. All information found on this website should be treated as an introduction to authorised breakdown recovery service providers where breakdown cover can be purchased either on their website or over the phone. The website does not provide any form of advice or recommendation of one service over any other. Although all of the information on this website is kept up to date, it is provided "as is" and with specific disclaimer of any warranties of merchantability. The information provided should always be confirmed on the advertiser's website directly.



    Links

    Links to other web sites are provided by <mywebsite> in good faith and for information only. We disclaim any responsibility for the materials contained in any web site linked to this site.
    Minor changes in red - nb not quite sure what exactly is meant by "clients site". Looks fine otherwise.

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    Re: Correction of "terms and conditions" - please

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    Minor changes in red - nb not quite sure what exactly is meant by "clients site". Looks fine otherwise.

    Thank you for your help! Clients' site means if somebody is for instance redirected from my website to another one belonging to my client.

    I am quite surprised in terms of low number of mistakes... It seems to be far to low

    Thank you very much and sorry for double posting, I'll remove the other one shortly.

    Sebastian

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