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    Default another one, thank you very much~/The woods

    The woods

    Silent woods sound whisper
    Something strange swept across my sight.
    As darkness close on,
    The evil arise,
    And axe rose,
    Blood burst forth.


    Sleeping Kitty suddenly bray,
    Nothing unusual seen but the dark.
    As the poor heart calm down,
    The lamps off,
    Eyes on you,
    Maybe bloody axe also.


    Should you sleep soundly?
    Or just lie in you bed?
    Although God is not with you.
    Clasp the axe,
    Tear up the dark,
    And light shine you.

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    Default Re: another one, thank you very much~/The woods

    Quote Originally Posted by jimmy View Post
    The woods

    Silent woods whisper
    Something strange sweeps across my sight.
    As darkness closes in,
    The evil rises,
    An axe rose,
    Blood burst forth.


    Sleeping Kitty suddenly cried,
    Nothing but the dark.
    As the poor heart beats,
    The light goes off,
    And eyes are on you,
    Maybe, too the bloody axe.


    Should you sleep soundly?
    Or just lie in you bed?
    Although God is not with you.
    Clasp the axe,
    Tear up the dark,
    And the light will shine on you.
    very good.

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    Default Re: another one, thank you very much~/The woods

    thanks.

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    Default Re: another one, thank you very much~/The woods

    good job! but I feel a little confused about the way you use the tenses, any answer? by the way a little work on spelling, otherwise you're great keep writing. J

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