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Dear Ms Phuong Thao,
I have read your recruitment advertisement on the website kiemviec.com. I’m very interested in working at this position.
You will see from the enclosed resume that I have just graduated university in 2005. I had no many experiences but I suppose that it is not too important. I will learn and work as hard as possible if I am recruited to work in your company .
I can be easy to demonstrate it to you. I spent 2 months to practise in Engineering Staff of Colgate-Palmolive company. That was not too long time but it was quite enough for the manager to assess my ability very well and one thing I also use to demonstrate to you is my thesis to be assessed 9/10.
If you feel that my qualifications are suitable, I can be available for interview at short notice. Thank you for your consideration.
Thank you so much Curmudgeon. Please help me correct this CV.
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Birthday: January 10th, 1984
Marital status: single
-Engineering in Environmental Technology in Nong Lam University (graduated in November 2005)
-I practised labour safety, management environment of factory (including waste solid, waste water, and air pollution)
-I was a Mathematics tutor for the 6th and 8th Form students
-Have one year’s experience in designing waste water treatment system; environmental consultant, doing EIA (environmental impact assessment)
-Vinhlong Environment and Resource Engineering Center December 2005 – June 2006
-I have done a part time job as designing waste water treatment system and doing EIA recently.
COMPUTER SKILLS: AutoCad, MS Office (Word, Excel, Power Point), Mapinfo
FOREIGN LANGUAGE SKILLS: speak and write English pretty well; reading comprehension English and environmental documents
OTHER RELEVANT SKILLS: possess fairly good communication, interpersonal and organisational skills
INTERESTS: computer, internet, news, languages, ping-pong
Use solid waste instead of waste solid.