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The chart shown the number of immigrates in USA in different year.
First in 1850 the number of immigrate was two in half million person, in 1860 the number of immigrate decreased to two million, but in the year 1870 the number of immigrate rise up to 2.9 million, and in the year 1880 it increase sharply and become 5 millions, at the year 1890 it decrease again to 3.9 million, well in 1900 it has a sharp rise to 9 million, but in the year 1910 it fall again to 5.5 million, since 1920 it decrease again to 4 million, finally in 1930 there was sharply decline to 1 million.
The diagram explain for us that the number of the immigrant decline than the past.
The chart shows the number of immigrants to the USA in different years.
In 1850 the number of immigrants was 2.5 million. In 1860 this number decreased to 2 million. In 1870 the number increased again to 2.9 million, and in 1880 there was a sharp increase to 5 million. In 1890 there was a decrease to 3.9 million but by 1900 the figure had risen sharply to 9 million. By 1910 it had fallen to 5.5 million. This reduction continued, until, by 1920 it stood at 4 million. Finally, in 1930 there was a sharp decline to 1 million. The diagram illustrates to us that the number of immigrants has slowly declined over the years.