Results 1 to 2 of 2

    • Join Date: May 2006
    • Posts: 109
    • Post Thanks / Like
    #1

    Can I write like this to my General Manager :

    Dear Teacher,

    Please correct the following sentences if they are incorrect.

    1) Can I write like this to my General Manager : Kindly arrange to pay my sales commission before I leave for India on vacation.

    (Payment to be made from the Accounts department. So, can I use "arrange to pay" in the above sentence?)

    2) I need to go to India urgently to resolve some personal problems.

    Thanks in advance.

    Sweetie.

  1. MikeNewYork's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Academic
      • Native Language:
      • American English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 16,120
    • Post Thanks / Like
    #2

    Re: Can I write like this to my General Manager :

    Quote Originally Posted by sweetie_sneha View Post
    Dear Teacher,

    Please correct the following sentences if they are incorrect.

    1) Can I write like this to my General Manager : Kindly arrange to pay my sales commission before I leave for India on vacation.

    (Payment to be made from the Accounts department. So, can I use "arrange to pay" in the above sentence?)

    2) I need to go to India urgently to resolve some personal problems.

    Thanks in advance.

    Sweetie.
    1. Use the causative there. Kindly arrange to have my sales commission paid before I leave for India on vacation.

    2. I must go to India immediately to resolve some personal problems.

Similar Threads

  1. write sy or write to sy
    By baraka in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 09-Aug-2006, 20:25
  2. Write to him or write him?
    By David27 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 01-Feb-2006, 07:42
  3. General - positive? negative? or what?
    By morning in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 25-Nov-2005, 05:30
  4. surgeon general
    By Unregistered in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 07-Nov-2004, 20:39
  5. how to write essay?
    By Anonymous in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 06-Mar-2003, 23:38

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •