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    Could any teacher help me in paraphrasing the following sentences?

    sorry. a mistake in spelling . It should be "edge" (i think it means "positive position" here".)

    1/The edge lies in your awareness of how people negotiate the world over.

    Also there is another sentence which I would be much appreciate if you could help me in paraphrasing:

    2/This year Top Class(a company)invested heavily in a new plant in China and need to expand sales by volumen and revenue to pay for the borrowing costs and to justify the growth in capacity.

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    Re:
    • The edge lies in your awareness of how people negotiate the world over.

    Try:
    • The advantage lies in your awareness of how people negotiate the world over.

    Or:
    • Your awareness of how people negotiate the world over gives you an edge.


    Re:
    • This year Top Class(a company)invested heavily in a new plant in China and need to expand sales by volumen and revenue to pay for the borrowing costs and to justify the growth in capacity.

    Try:
    • This year, Top Class invested heavily in a new plant in China and needs to expand sales volume and increase revenue so it can pay the borrowing costs and justify the increase in capacity.


    What do you think?

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