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    topic :write a report for the director,exlaining why mobile phone are necessary for student and recommending ways in which thier use could be controlled. **note write your report in 120-180words.


    Introduction

    This report explains why mobile phones are important for students,and makes recommendations about thier use in the school.the information comes from students and thier parents.

    necessary

    mobile are good communication for students to keep in touch with parents,friends and relatives.If there were an emergency ,it would be difficult for parents to contact their children.In such a situation, a mobile is very useful,almost necessary.Parents provide children with mobile phone so they can keeps tabs on them and parents can reminds them not to saty out too late.
    mobile phone are not only good communication skill but it helps us having a calculator which can be useful in mathematics,physics and chemistry lesson and you can also use daily reminder for your timetabale.

    recommendation
    students shoulds either turn off or put on silent mode their mobile phone during the lesson in class.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ghai_prince13 View Post
    topic :Write a report for the director, exlaining[explaining] why mobile phone [phones] are necessary for student [students] and recommending ways in which thier [their] use could be controlled. **note write your report in 120-180words.


    Introduction

    This report explains why mobile phones are important for students,and makes recommendations about thier use in the school.the information comes from students and thier parents.

    necessary [Capitalization needed]

    mobile [First word in a sentence must be capitalized; - either keep to mobiles or mobile phones. You are inconsistent in this.] are good communication [wrong word to use here - you could use a single word, like vital, essential, valuable] for students to keep in touch with parents,friends and relatives.If [space after punctuation] there were an emergency,it would be difficult for parents to contact their children.In such a situation, a mobile is very useful,almost necessary.Parents provide children with mobile phones so they can keeps tabs on them and parents [do not need parents twice in this sentence] can reminds[remind] them not to saty[stay] out too late.
    mobile phone are [A mobile phone is] not only [a] good communication skill [tool would be a better word]but it helps us having a calculator which can be useful in mathematics,physics and chemistry lessons and you can also use daily reminder for your timetabale[timetable]. [I am sure you can, but you do not indicate why the mobile phone is useful for this]

    recommendation
    students
    shoulds[should] either turn off or put on silent mode their mobile phone during the lesson in class [lessons OR class].
    You need to be careful of your capitalization and spacing. Also, The last sentence could well be split into two sentences - rewrite.

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    Default Re: please check and corrent the mistakes

    thank u very much ..

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    Default plz help me in this also

    question 1
    present to itself that during your stay in the country, whose language you study, you should it was necessary purchase in the book store dictionary. Describe to your comrades about how:
    1) you requested aid in the search for the section of reference literature;
    2) who and as you helped;
    3) about the specific character of sale to book production
    question 2
    . you they found in the school cell phone. Write rather short communication to the board of declarations. Inform about what thing you found. Write, where and when you found it. Describe finding and you will report, as with you to meet

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    Default Re: please check and corrent the mistakes

    what you exactly want?

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    Default Re: plz help me in this also

    Quote Originally Posted by ghai_prince13 View Post
    question 1
    present to itself that during your stay in the country, whose language you study, you should it was necessary purchase in the book store dictionary. Describe to your comrades about how:
    1) you requested aid in the search for the section of reference literature;
    2) who and as you helped;
    3) about the specific character of sale to book production
    question 2
    . you they found in the school cell phone. Write rather short communication to the board of declarations. Inform about what thing you found. Write, where and when you found it. Describe finding and you will report, as with you to meet
    Write your pieces and see what people think.

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