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    please help edit my paragraph

    Interesting place in Phnom Penh

    There are many exciting places in Phnom penh that people can go and enjoy, but one of the most interesting places for them to go is river sight. With this place, they can go sightseeing along the river or sitting on a bench of the river taking natural air. Walking a long the river, people can do many activities such as exercising, trying many different kinds of food, and taking boat trip as well. Taking a boat trip along the river is fantastic because they can make a very romantic party with their friends and sing Karaoke on the boat. For foreigners, they can have a drink in restaurants or bars along the Sisowath Quay or visiting the royal palace which is located in front of the river. Inside the royal palace, they can see a very beautiful garden and several wonderful buildings. More importantly, they can visit the artificial Angkor Wat temple in the royal palace as well.

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    Re: please help edit my paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by esophea View Post
    Interesting place in Phnom Penh

    There are many exciting places in Phnom Penh that people can go and enjoy, but one of the most interesting places for them to go?? is river sight??. With this place??, they can go sightseeing along the river or just sit on a bench near the river and breathe the fresh air. Walking along the river, people can do many activities such as exercising, trying many different kinds of food, and taking boat trips as well. Taking a boat trip along the river is fantastic because they can have a very romantic party with their friends and sing Karaoke on the boat. Visitors can have a drink in restaurants or bars along the Sisowath Quay or view the royal palace which is located in front of the river. Inside the royal palace, they can enjoy a very beautiful garden and several wonderful buildings. More importantly, they can visit the artificial Angkor Wat temple in the royal palace as well.
    What is(are) the name(s) of the river(s)?

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    Re: please help edit my paragraph

    river sight = riverside

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    they can visit a replica/model of the Angkor Wat temple in the royal palace

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