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    Smile check these sentences, please

    Hi, could someone check if these sentences are correct,
    that would be nice

    - I stepped into my car and winded down the car window.

    - Itís really hard to be honest, especially at night. Thatís when the pain is the hardest to bear.

    - He wasnít the type that was harassed or something, he chose to be alone.

    - I donít know if school starting again after the whole summer makes me tired or if Iím just bored of everything.

    Thanks in advance

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    Re: check these sentences, please

    Quote Originally Posted by sagaji View Post
    Hi, could someone check if these sentences are correct,
    that would be nice

    - I got into my car and wound down the window.

    - It’s really hard to be *honest* Do you mean alone?.. Honest does not make sense, especially at night. That’s when the pain is the hardest to bear.

    - He wasn’t the type that was bothered by anything, he chose to be alone.

    - I don’t know whether school starting again after the long summer break makes me tired or if I’m just bored by everything.

    Thanks in advance
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    Re: check these sentences, please

    concerning the 3rd sentence, can you really use the word bothered?
    because i'm talking about a loner, he's not being bullied or something, he just wants to be alone. maybe i should just use BULLIED instead of HARASSAED?

    help me out

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    Re: check these sentences, please

    In this context 'bothered' means 'concerned', thus

    He wasn't the type that let things concern him

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    Re: check these sentences, please

    okay thanks ^_^

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