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    Madness....!
    There's madness; we never see it, just by the eye of madness. People and shapes, When we see them, the impression is deprecation and shock. Yes they are mad. Their shapes, their faces, their behaviors, or maybe their reactions don't tell us about their secret. As they borrow the mind, they borrow the head band. When the features were shown and teeth were appeared, we see that hearts are beating and minds are analyzing and maybe indicating to a mind which is out of logic and reasonableness. They are passengers with their imaginations to worlds that have ever touched by any human mind .They are indicative that the madness is a part of creativity, unless the creativity is a part of madness

    Madness speak about four mad person
    A child in madness become a man
    A guy breaks on life stage
    Then inspiration story


    thank for you

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    Quote Originally Posted by Edil View Post
    Madness....!
    There's madness; but we don't understand, we just see the eye of madness. The people and the outlines. When we see it, the impression is deprecation and shock. Yes they are mad. But their shapes, their faces, their behavior, or maybe their reactions doesn't tell us their secret. As they borrow the mind, they borrow the head band.(I don't understand this part) When features are revealed and teeth are bared , we see that hearts are beating and minds are analyzing, and maybe indicating a mind which is illogical and unreasonable. They are passengers with their imagination to worlds that have never been touched by the human mind .They are testament that madness is a part of creativity,.. unless creativity is a part of madness?

    Madness speaks for the mad
    A mad child takes on the strength of a man
    A man will break on the stage of life
    This is the inspiration of this story


    thank for you

    Maybe I have changed it too much

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