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    formal letter

    hello
    pls check this letter ,rate it and give me suggestions for corrections
    its a inquiry letter to an organised tours company
    about a tour ro NYC
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    24 bush St
    London
    11/1/07

    to "see the world travel company"
    NYC

    Dear Sir

    hello my name is john ,im planning a tour to the United states
    and i understand that your company
    arranges oraginsed tours of this kind
    im 44 years old and i have many past travel experiences

    on the tour i would like to visit as many historic sites ,museums and galleries as possible
    i would like to visit the statue of Liberty and the science and space museum

    i would like to know the cost of your tours and exactly what they include
    and what are the accommodations that i will stay in

    i wait to hear from you
    and look forward to the tour

    yours faithfully

    john
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    Re: formal letter

    Quote Originally Posted by flasher View Post
    hello
    pls check this letter ,rate it and give me suggestions for corrections
    its a inquiry letter to an organised tours company
    about a tour ro NYC
    Hello. Please check this letter, rate it, and give me suggestions for corrections. It's an inquiry letter to an organized tours company about a tour to NYC.
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    Quote Originally Posted by flasher View Post
    24 bush St
    Quote Originally Posted by flasher View Post

    London
    11/1/07



    to "see the world travel company"

    NYC
    24 Bush St.

    London

    11/01/07
    To: See The World Travel Company
    NYC

    Quote Originally Posted by flasher View Post
    Dear Sir
    hello my name is john ,im planning a tour to the United states
    and i understand that your company
    arranges oraginsed tours of this kind

    im 44 years old and i have many past travel experiences
    Dear Sir:


    Hello. My name is John. I'm planning a tour to the United States and I understand that your company arranges organized tours in the United States. I am 44 years old and have many past travel experiences.


    Quote Originally Posted by flasher View Post
    on the tour i would like to visit as many historic sites ,museums and galleries as possible

    i would like to visit the statue of Liberty and the science and space museum
    On the tour I would like to visit as many historic sites, museums and galleries as possible. I would like to visit the Statue of Liberty and the science and space museum.
    Quote Originally Posted by flasher View Post
    i would like to know the cost of your tours and exactly what they include
    and what are the accommodations that i will stay in

    i wait to hear from you
    and look forward to the tour

    yours faithfully

    john
    I would like to know the cost of your tours and exactly what they include, andI would like to know about accommodations.


    I look forward to hearing from you, and I look forward to the tour.


    Yours faithfully,


    John


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