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    Grammer

    In my paragraph, I need help with the structure of the sentence. Please help.



    Stephanie, I concur with you, there is unlimited advantages to having access to the Internet. I consume at least 95% of my job online and the advantage of being online to obtain price quotes via Internet. Having the luxury of hands-on contact World Wide is a major improvement. But, there are some disadvantages. Because there are unlimited amount of accessible information available, criminals’ activities occur, as well.


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    Re: Grammer

    there is unlimited advantages- are
    I consume at least 95% of my job online- you don't consume jobs- you could spend 95% of your working time
    the advantage of being online- have the advantage
    World Wide- worldwide
    there are unlimited amount of accessible information- amounts

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