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    swapna is offline Newbie
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    need help to correct my paragraph

    I came to know somefacts about Abraham lincoln by David a Alder from his book "the picture book of Abrahamlicoln".first,he was born in 1809,feb 12th.He was born in kentucky in a small log cabin to Thomas Lincol and Nancy hanks and sarah is his sister.Next,he became the 16 th President of United States of America in 1860.Also he was the president during the Civil war and he abolished the slavery.Finally,i pick a book to read about abrahamlincoln,becasue he is a greatpresident and he proved a poor man can become a president.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: need help to correct my paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by swapna View Post
    I came to know somefacts about Abraham lincoln by David a Alder from his book "the picture book of Abrahamlicoln".first,he was born in 1809,feb 12th.He was born in kentucky in a small log cabin to Thomas Lincol and Nancy hanks and sarah is his sister.Next,he became the 16 th President of United States of America in 1860.Also he was the president during the Civil war and he abolished the slavery.Finally,i pick a book to read about abrahamlincoln,becasue he is a greatpresident and he proved a poor man can become a president.
    You need to check your typing when you finish.

    1: Always put a space after punctuation marks. None before them.

    2: Proper names must start with a capital letter.

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