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    plaese correct a short paragragh~thx~

    Hong kong is a knowledge-based society.If you have an excellent acadamic result,you are able to enter university and esaily find a comfortable,good salary job.thus,many students working very hard want to enter university in order to success.although It is ture that those entering university repersent those are the top students having good ability of learning,and,comparing those students without entering university,can esaily find a job,success don't depend on whether pepole have university education.

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    Re: plaese correct a short paragragh~thx~

    Quote Originally Posted by kalokjai View Post
    Hong Kong is a knowledge-based society. If you have excellent acadamic results??,you will be able to attend university and easily find a good job with a great salary. Thus, many students working very hard want to enter university in order to succeed. Although it is true that those entering university represent those are the top students having good ability of learning,and,comparing those students without entering university,can esaily find a job,success don't depend on whether pepole have university education.
    i'm kinda confused.

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    Re: plaese correct a short paragragh~thx~

    additionnal correction : easily-- success doesn't depend-- people

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