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    kohyoongliat is offline Senior Member
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    Default cloze passage for year 2 students

    This following is a cloze passage for year 2 pupils. Could someone please edit it? Any suggestions to improve the passage are welcome. Thanks in advance.


    One evening, after school, I was waiting for my father to fetch me. It was half past six and yet he had not arrived. Soon I was crying.

    My form teacher asked my why and I told her about my problem. She told me not to worry.

    Just then somebody tapped me on the right shoulder. I turned around. It was my father. He explained that one of his car tyres had punctured, and he was delayed by the changing of tyres.

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    Default Re: cloze passage for year 2 students

    I'd join the first two paragraphs together.

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    Default Re: cloze passage for year 2 students

    Thanks, Tdol, I agree with you.

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