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    kohyoongliat is offline Senior Member
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    short passage for year 2 students

    Please edit this passage for meant for year 2 students. Thanks in advance.

    Last Monday, Grandmother was ill. She had to be hospitalised. My parents, my sister and I visited her the next day. When we reached the hospital, she was resting on her bed. We brought her some fruit and biscuits. She was very happy to see us.

    We sat at the side of her bed and chatted with her. My sister and I cracked some jokes to cheer her up. We had to leave when a nurse told us that the visiting hours were over. My sister and I hugged Grandmother and promised that we would visit her the next day.

    I hope that Grandmother will get well soon.
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    Re: short passage for year 2 students

    I wouldn't use the capital letter- you don't for the others.

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    Re: short passage for year 2 students

    PS 'resting in her bed'- if you're on a bed, you're not under the sheets, blankets, etc. -)

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