Would somebody please help me with the English?
Would you interested in a research collaboration between our faculty and the HEALTH's research centre in Canada? I am happy to assist our faculty with this.The collaboration may work for examples as sending our lecturers for sabital study here, training for our lecturers in applying WHO research grants, co-supervising honours or post grad students from this centre in undertaking their researchs in (name of a country), working together in a research or sending our lecturers here for post grad studies.
I am very sure this collaboration will help us in developing the faculty in term of research and international relationship. Your opinion is highly appreciated before I can proceed more. I threw this idea to the HEALTH's director last week , he was interested and he is willing to send you a letter for further discussions on this.
hello my friend,
i am impressed in your letter. because i am just registered and i don't speak english well.
thanks for your letter. it was good
Would you interested- be interested
or examples as sending examples such as
sabital - sabbatical
applying WHO research grants- for
their researchs- research
in a research- on research
international relationship-international relationships
Your opinion is highly appreciated before I can proceed more- Your opinion would be highly appreciated before proceeding any further
I threw this idea- informal- I discussed this idea with the HEALTH's director last week;
PS Dear Sir- do you haver a name? If not, unless you know it's a man, I'd use 'Sir or Madam'