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    Please revise my short text below, anyone?

    Dear Richard:

    How are you? I am don't know, one of the cafe attendance at Starbuck caf. Please acknowledge my invitation messages attached with this mail message. May I know when you will reply to me? Also, when is your graduation and location of your graduation ceremony hold, please? Thank you.

    Have a great day!

    don't know

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    I am don't know, one of the cafe attendance at Starbuck caf.- I am, if you don't know, one of the attendants at Starbucks.
    and location of your graduation ceremony hold,- and where will the raduation ceremony be held

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    Thank you. I still cannot see my own mistakes.

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