Though I wouldn't call myself an expert, I've been studying legal English, so I'll try to help you.
I indicated my corrections with velvet colour. Some parts were really obscure, I'm not sure if I got the right meaning..
- As SC is solely a collecting agent on behalf of Cout LTD, a contractual obligation to purchase acc.sys package and the accessories thereof only arises between the respective applicant or agent and Cout LTD.
- The SC dept. accepts cancellation requests, reported by the purchaser, within 7 days after the date of receiving the package. In the event a cancellation ismade after the free trial period, the agent's commission fee (?) and any costs incurred in connection with transportation, insurance or courier-delivery of the acc.sys Accessories will be deducted from the purchase price (?). Cout LTD is only an intermediary in this agreement, and hence cannot take any responsibilities for defects of the acc.sys Accessories.
Upon signing this counterpart by the authorized signature, the company hereby undertakes to collect all outstanding debts from the above-mentioned agents commission and to refund the balance of the outstanding loan amount until it is fully paid, if the agent is dismissed by the Company or resigns for any reason.
- Please note that no insurance coverage is provided for the acc.sys Accessories.
Hope you like this version.
Kind regards: V