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Natural environment in Australia is gret. Also, I would like live in a quiet city.In other words, I would like to avoid a crowded city.
My ideal boyfriend should meet the following qualifications. First of all, he should enjoy the same sports I do. secondly, his family should be moral, and well-behave.
The natural environment in Australia is great.
I would also like to live in a quiet city.
In other words, I would like to avoid a crowded city.
My ideal ...qualifications (sounds OK)
Firstly, he should enjoy the same sports that I do.
Secondly, his family should be one of high morals and good upbringing.