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    Default Please check these sentences.

    Dear Teacher,

    Please check the following sentences and let me know wether the words in bold are correct or not?

    At present I am employed with RPC(Royal Plastic Company), as a Sales Secretary but feel that your job offers greater scope for career growth and use of my abilities.

    Regards,

    Sweetie

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    Default Re: Please check these sentences.

    Quote Originally Posted by sweetie_sneha View Post
    Dear Teacher,

    Please check the following sentences and let me know wether the words in bold are correct or not?

    At present I am employed with RPC(Royal Plastic Company), as a Sales Secretary but I feel that your job offers a greater scope for career growth and the realization of my potential (use of my abilities).

    Regards,

    Sweetie
    That's my take on it.

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