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    Would somebody please comments the english?
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    !. For instance, the worldwide aggressive promotion of the epilepsy drug (name of a drug) failed to mention cardiac risks.

    2.The effectiveness of the X code of conducts in controlling pharmaceutical promotion is questionable as no research has been done to examine if it is implemented in practice.

    3.Therefore, there is an urgent need for an independent monitoring and research which may provide information on pharmaceutical promotion activities to the government.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    an independent monitoring and research- no article and a comma after 'research'

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    Thanks Tdol,
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    1....failed to mention cardiac risk as a side-effect (or: side-reaction).

    2. The effectiveness of X Code of Conduct.... is questionable as no research has been done to confirm (validate) its implementation in practice.

    3. there is an urgent need for research that can provide the government with accurate information on the promotion of pharmaceutical products.

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    Thanks Bianca.
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