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    Can someone help me edit this line please?

    " Racial profiling is a crucial topic for it concerns anyone who's being constantly delayed, stopped, or searched for investigation purposes based up colour, ethnicity, religion or place of origin. "

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    Default Re: editting a line

    Try,

    based on, not based up
    editing, not editting
    need help or of need in help, not need in help

    All the best.

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    Default Re: editting a line

    ...Also, these phrase strike me as odd: "being constantly delayed" and "searched for investigation purposes". I'd say


    Racial profiling is a crucial topic. It concerns anyone who's constantly being stopped and searched on the basis of colour, ethnicity, religion or place of origin.

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